Feedback isn’t a to-do list of fix-its.  You need to interpret feedback and you’re allowed to disagree with some points

One of the reasons I used to convince myself to take acting classes was to improve my writing.  I thought

Whenever any character does anything, there’s consequences for his actions.  It’s not possible to go through life doing things that

Your first draft is meant to be terrible.  No matter who you are, it will be terrible.  Terrible is relative,

One really important facet of screenwriting is the ability to convey the existence of a world that isn’t real.  It